Jackson Tegu recently updated his seven Second Skins to align with Monsterhearts 2 rules and priorities. Here he reflects on one of those changes.
Stories made with Monsterhearts are strange, shifting things. To support that malleability, moves need to be adaptable, focused, and clear. The Wyrm’s move Jealous Coils is none of these, but even more damning is that the move leads to uninteresting fiction. So let us walk the road from Jealous Coils to Covetous.
Wow, there is really a lot going on there. Like, too much! The trigger is very vague: “gets close to” means emotionally, but at what point do you actually roll? When she puts her arm around them? When one invites the other to walk home together?
I began rewriting the move, but something made me pause. There was something deeper about the move that felt… off. I figured it out: the subject of the move was not the person you treasure, but the “other guy,” the one you’re “protecting” your treasured person from. MH1’s Jealous Coils didn’t care about the treasured character’s actions, even though the Wyrm’s player has shown interest in the treasured character by deciding the Wyrm treasures them. Besides, even though the Wyrm sometimes thinks of people as objects, that doesn’t mean the game should make that outlook easy– the opposite is more interesting! So let’s see the treasured person as a subject, and give them agency. Besides, a snapshot of the Wyrm arguing with some rando for the third time this session is going to be super boring, but a snapshot of the treasured person yelling at the Wyrm to mind their own business and back the hell off for the third time this session? That feels like we’re building toward something. So the trigger for MH2’s Covetous became “when someone you treasure shows affection for someone else.”
All the getting and losing of Strings in MH1’s Jealous Coils was feeling reasonless and gimmicky. (Sure, Monsterhearts players had been making sense of it and making it work, but the String transfer aspect didn’t have an internal sense to it.) I knew that I wanted this magical-transferal-of-power vibe, but it never really came together for me in play, often because rando #2, like rando #1 before them, didn’t have any Strings on the person the Wyrm treasures. There wasn’t anything to transfer. So scrap all those damn Strings. Let’s get raw.
I wanted something that didn’t feel like it dictated a scene, but handed the player opportunities to start scenes or interrupt a scene’s trajectory and take it in a new direction. And instead of the Wyrm trying to intimidate rando #2, I wanted a slap in rando’s face. So I write the Wyrm a cheque for the amount of “1 Forward” and know they’ll spend it well.
I want to point out that even though I’m excited for the treasured person to yell at the Wyrm for being too socially invasive and for the Wyrm to get jealous and slap rando #2, those situations aren’t the only possibilities as outcomes of MH2’s Covetous. And though I’m sad to say goodbye to Jealous Coil’s “you say something you’ll regret” 7-9 option, the versatility of Covetous more than makes up for it. Maybe the treasured person will seek protection from another Main Character instead of confronting the Wyrm about their boundary-crossing. Maybe the Wyrm will use their 1 Forward to seduce rando #2 instead of fighting them.
One of the strengths of Covetous is that it points toward interesting situations and dynamics well beyond its mechanical outcome. I’m pleased.
The Monsterhearts Second Skins are available right here.